To take writing to higher levels of style, it’s critical to understand how readers react to what’s presented.
To make writing flow, to make the emotional experience coherent for readers, cultivating a deep understanding of what readers see on the outside and what they experience on the inside is key.
This post is a brief exercise in viewing both what’s happening
Outside
and
(Inside).
Either this will resonate with you, or it will be incomprehensible nonsense.
I hope it’s the former and not the latter.
Any writer feedback in the comments will be appreciated.
(Inside) Outside
((Inside 2) Inside) Outside
(((Inside 3) Inside 2) Inside 1) Outside
Surprise followed by a Search for Information.
(WTF? Let’s Figure this out?)
Hmmm.
(Contemplation)
The First Tool of Meditation.
Basics.
Fundamentals.
I Can Do That.
(Practice, Practice, Practice)
(Rely’s on the Signal, (Repetition))
Repetition. Repetition. Repetition
(Constant Reinforcement)
(There’s more depth here I can’t quite Visualize)
(Tuning The Frequency. Like a Radio)
Precision
(Do you see the Game?)
Suspense
.
.
.
(What Is this Guy Waiting For?)
I’m attempting to read his mind, but I am coming up Blank.
(Increase Dynamic Range of The Amplifier)
I need to Dig Deeper.
Signal Tuning
Signal Tuning
Signal Tuning
Do you Hear ME?
(Suspense, Waiting for an Answer)
Holy Shit! I Get It!!!
(Major Amplifier to your Tuning Frequency Giving You a Blissful State of Peace.)
Holy Crap!
(That was a major amplifier)
DO
You
HEAR
ME!!!
(Hit that Fucker, a Boost, In order Make Extra Ready Double Sure you Understand)
Holy FUCK!
This Guy is Blowing My Mind.
(Buildup plus anticipation)
Complex Bullshit I didn’t Previously Understand that now seems simple.
(Wisdom)
WOW!!!!
Are you Primed?
(Pregnant Pause)
I’ll Stop.
(Small letdown if you enjoyed the game.)
Faith in Process.
(That would work.)
Unity.
(That balances everyone’s concerns. (It FEELS RIGHT.))
Harmony.
(Isn’t that Nice.)
It will — All — BE — OKAY.
(Lingering Sense of Peace)
Glorious. Praise. Peace. (The After Glow.)
Sit with that for a moment.
It’s tasty?
(Lingering satisfaction)
You tasted that too, right?
We’re all in this together.
(The Bliss of Union with Others)
Isn’t that Cool!!!
The Peanut Gallery chants Over and Over Again.
Chanting
Chanting
Chanting
(Funny how that works)
Ahhh.
Did you notice the Repetition, Repetition. Repetition. of Ahhh… (A soothing Sense of Relief)
Oh! It’s Sweet!!!
(Bliss, with a lingering afterglow.)
Wow! I understand…
(Satisfaction, Completeness (Attention Diverts, not to return))
Wow What a Feeling!
I’m Dancing on the Ceiling!
(Bliss, with High Intensity)
~~wink~~
Anatta
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